I love my mom and dad

Short story with a cute message....

There is a lovely married couple lived in town and they had a cute daughter named, nira. They all lived together happily for four years.
But it doesn't remained long until the 'devil part' in marriage life arises. They started fighting each other for simple things. She starts pestering him for simple things, thinking like she is caring. He is not ready to endure this simple misunderstanding, he also argues with her. The reason behind this they doesn't love each other anymore...its gone. The marriage life is getting bored but they didn't ready to admit it.
Atlast they applied for divorce...
The real victim here is Nira...
She didn't even know the meaning of divorce but all she knew is her mom and dad were not going to live together.
She didn't know how to convince them either. She had been crying all day when her mom and dad were arguing.
Noone is there to take care of her.
Now they were living in same house because it belongs to both of them...
She drew a painting, in that her family was standing in a park. She is standing in the middle her mom helds her right hand and her dad helds her left hand they were walking happily.
She wanted to give it to her parents. Also she wanted to tell them that she want both of them...
But they are not ready to talk to her. They both were living in seperate room...
The case comes to judgement,
The judge decided to give divorce but the problem is whom is going to take care of nira...
Her dad said ...I am the one who took good care of her. I will take care of her well, please give my daughter to me.
Though the law doesn't permit the baby to stay with father he doesn't want to lose his baby.
Her mom said...I am the one who took good care of her and also as per law the baby must stay with mother, please give my daughter to me.
They both were started arguing in court...
Then the judge called Nira.
She's is still having that painting in her hand...
Though the 5years old baby doesn't have the right to choose decision they just asked her thought...
Nira, your mom and dad are going to get divorce which means they don't want to live together. Now, tell me. Whom do you want your 'mom or dad'?

The act that nira did stunned the whole court....

She tore that painting equally and gave it to judge
and she said....
'Give me like this'....
I want my mom and dad...
and she ran out of the court with eyes full of tears.
Then her mom and dad realised their mistake.
Their eyes broken into tears too...
They were friends for two years and they loved each other for three years. Now they spent six years of marriage life ,all of a sudden they forgot all the memories in their life and decided to divorce...
But their daughter lived with them for five years, she don't want to loose them...
They canceled their divorce for their daughter and for them and they lived happily ever after...
Sometimes it's good to admit our mistake and apologise for that. For the price of good relationship we can loose anything....

Author's Note

This is my first short story....please ignore grammar mistakes and post your feedback whatever it is....

Reviews

[Marcy Chavez]

This is so beautifully written. I really loved the way you include strong ideas using just a few words. And the way you describe everything makes the reader feels Nira's pain and heartbreak to see her parents getting divorced. But my favorite part and the one that almost made me cry, was at the end, such a beautiful twist and such a beautiful life lesson.