no change

no change

A Poem by davidramos12344
"

I don't see change.

"

They say the world changed

But. I don’t f*****g see change

They're still homeless people,

Street kids, discrimination,

And war. I know we’re still

Working progress but I know

We as a people should do more

To change this world. Cuz if

We don’t help to change the

World then the world will never

change for the good.

© 2017 davidramos12344


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Immature and clichéd. There is always progress, what was the world like 30 years ago? Far, far worse. It's one thing to highlight the day's injustice but it's counter productive to pretend nothing has "changed".... not to mention disrespectful to those who fought and died for it over the past couple centuries. Sentiments like this poem presents are why modern day social justice warriors are laughed at and not taken seriously. I really hope you're just pandering to the days sentiment... if not , you are a part of the problem. Also,... using the word "cuz" is lazy and a sign of s****y writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on September 2, 2017
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A Poem by davidramos12344