why i love u

why i love u

A Poem by david.o
"

i wrote this for my fiance wich we have recently split x

"

 

This is why love you
 
I love u for so many reasons
and all of them are wonderfull
 
i love u for all the special qualaties
that make u one of a kind
the only one in the world for me
 
i love u for the things u do
that bring such a special feelings to my life
i love u for the silen times
when ur arms and eyes tell me all i need to know
 
i love u
because now
in my heart
 where there was nothing before
there is love for
u

© 2009 david.o


Author's Note

david.o
its only small bu its taken me a while lol

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I like this, it gives quite a cute vibe, especially the perfect ending and use of "U", simple and a great image of being in love, I can relate

only thing, do you mean silent? when you say silen?


Posted 14 Years Ago


this is really sweet

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 18, 2009

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david.o
david.o

hull, United Kingdom



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