The Sun Does Not Hide (Haiku)

Its been a hot summer. XD

The sun does not hide

The earth is washed in its heat

While I soak in sweat

Reviews

[Clockwork]

This poem is the epitome of the New England summer so far. It has been a scorcher and this poem relays a snapshot of what that is like.

[FlawedByDesign]

Pardon me for saying, but this made me chuckle when I think
about the heatwaves we get to live through these days.
This comes across as a haiku to emphasize self pity and
it's right in doing so. The "soaking in sweat" will soon turn
to drowning - lol

Well done.

[Onyx_Rayne]

Very nicely done and considering that, in my area it's been up over 100 degrees every day for the past two weeks... it's definitely relevant.

I love the middle line, it does an excellent job of linking the first and third. Haikus are always so much fun and despite their tiny size, one can really say a lot with the few words.

Fantastic job - Love it :)