Someday Soon

One day I hope to see your face again <3

 

 

 

These tear stains on my face are a permanent tattoo

A reminder of all that I lost when it comes to memories of you

Your sweet and caring ways, your smile and laughter

There no longer is that happily ever after.

I wish I could look into your deep expressive eyes

And really tell you that deserved heartfelt goodbye

I truly loved you with all of my heart

Not one part of me thought we’d be broken apart

You were supposed to be here forever

I did not want you to leave, no never

I know someday soon I will see you again

But until then

I will miss you so much my very special friend

 

These tear stains on my face are a permanent tattoo

A reminder of all that I lost when it comes to memories of you…

 

TRAVIS

Author's Note

This is dedicated to a dear friend of mine, Travis, that passed away earlier in the year. I miss him dearly but I know I'll see him again one day. Thank you for taking the time to read, rate, and review. I really appreciate it all :)

Reviews

[JRB]

this was a nicely put write, that i can relate to,,keep up the writes

[MsMermaid]

The perfection of this is so simple, so pure, so untouchable. It stands alone in a glory all its own that no one can find a way to improve it, nor should anyone even try. Words from your heart simply can't be perfected. I particularly liked the imagery of tear stains being a tattoo on your face, imparting the permanence of your grief. That you will miss him until you are reunited once again is self evident. So many can relate to such a tribute. Well done.

[dancingintherain]

This is sooo good. I can compare myself to this all too well.

[13ReasonsWhy]

this is so so heartfelt. i really loved it and it touched my heart. *wipes tear* in my favorites. i say no more.

[Sarah E. Pearson]

I can't say it any better than anyone else did: this was an extremely touching poem, beautiful, heartfelt. Even though I didn't know Travis, I know if he could/can see this beautiful poem you have wrote for him, he would think so, too, and he would love it; knowing he is remembered and still loved.
A truly touching and heartfelt piece; I loved every word of it. Outstanding job.

[Maddie:]]

I can definitely feel your pain for Travis here, you expressed it quite beautifully. Sorry for your loss, I'm sure Travis appreciates you dedicating this beautiful poem to him.

[paparapapa]

You just broke my heart. :( This was sad and so heartfelt. These were my favorite lines...
"I wish I could look into your deep expressive eyes
And really tell you that deserved heartfelt goodbye"
Oh, and I think it was a brilliant move how you repeated the last two lines. Awesome write. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem. I know Travis is happy wherever he is right now just knowing that he is loved by you. :)

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

its really nice and sad but still good

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

That's very very lovely poem , brought tears to my eyes ...

[Mashairi]

Aww, this is a sweet piece :). Girl, i bet he's looking down right now and appreciating what you've written for him. Excellently composed. Well done :)