Dancing With No Limit

Dance like there is nobody watching, dance like there is no tomorrow.

The sun shines its rays on me

and I dance

 

The rain beats down outside my windowpane

but in joy I still dance

 

The snow falls upon the quiet town

and still I dance

 

The winter winds blow and sickness comes

but still I dance

 

I fall ill

but inside… I still dance

 

Death is now near

but no matter what

I will still dance… until the end.

Author's Note

I wrote this on a whim... not real sure how good it is. But I really liked it and I hope you do too!

Reviews

[Mary C]

what a wonderful poem!

[Thea]

This piece has a really unique and beautiful imagery...
You've written this well...
Great work!
:)))

[Siren]

For writing this on a whim, you sure did a heck of a great job! I love it, keep writing :]

[Ami N.]

Wow. I loved it! :) Excellent write!

[Dylan S.]

Just keep dancing...I like this one. Very uplifting whenever you face down darkness.

[Wren]

Beautiful!! full of wisdom and very powerful language which creates many emotions! it really expresses the will to fight that many people hold onto until they die! very emotive poem, yet simple:) amazing!

[Me]

there is much wisdom in this piece. Well done!

[Macrory]

I have lost a few people in my life to cancer. To me this signified their unyeilding power to fight, regardless of the outcome. Very Touching.

[Wolfwind]

It's really good! These words empower us. It speaks of the wisdom that lies in the hearts of us all, never let the chaos of time bring us down. We all have our own inner spark and it shall not be dampened or extinguished until God is ready for us.

Wonderful Ink!
Aaron