Dancing With No Limit

Dance like there is nobody watching, dance like there is no tomorrow.

The sun shines its rays on me

and I dance

 

The rain beats down outside my windowpane

but in joy I still dance

 

The snow falls upon the quiet town

and still I dance

 

The winter winds blow and sickness comes

but still I dance

 

I fall ill

but inside… I still dance

 

Death is now near

but no matter what

I will still dance… until the end.

Author's Note

I wrote this on a whim... not real sure how good it is. But I really liked it and I hope you do too!

Reviews

[Lion of Judah]

I liked it. A very positive attitude

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

I like this. I believe the meaning behind it is life throws a lot of things your way to try to tame you and keep you down, but that no matter what you should always dance - be happy and care-free.

Nicely done.

[Ice Girl]

It was really amazing!

[Leslie Philibert]

Read this one because I liked the title.Like the insistant repeat of the dance imagery that gives the poem a real tough and unrepentant feeling.Good work.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

No doubt, it's great :)

[SwagMaster]

Beatuiful. I loved it.

[loverslovexliarsliex]

I really like this a lot(:

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now that is one great positive message... No matter your age as long as you are breathing then there is life to be lived.

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive way to look at death. Dance and sing till the end. Trick the God's into believing we are not afraid. I enjoyed this poem. I like the desire and the purpose of this poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

that's really sweet and I like that it has different levels/meanings
it was unusual too :)