Rainbow

Rainbow

A Poem by ~ Stefanie ~
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It was raining today and a rainbow appeared afterwards.

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Beautifully streaming across the sky

Hues ranging from vibrant red

To deep, intriguing indigo

 

After the rain, the sun appears

Casting a mysterious mist

And there it sits, in the sky, a rainbow

 

Through a prism on my windowsill

The sun hits it just right

And there it sits, on my wall, a rainbow

 

It catches my eye and I admire it

From afar

The rainbow

© 2011 ~ Stefanie ~


Author's Note

~ Stefanie ~
Thank you for reading :) Reviews and ratings would be greatly appreciated :)

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Again, another lovely poem:) you have a natural flow with helps get the imagery across! Wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Another beautiful poem. You create such vivid pictures for your readers, and your poems have such a gentle flow. You reel the reader in from start to finish. :) This was lovely.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it when life gives us beautiful things to see, even if they only last for a short time. Love this...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Deep. Descriptive. Awesome.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A beautiful poem. A wise person can see the beauty in their world. I like the way you described the rainbow. Thank you for the amazing poem.
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Posted 12 Years Ago


Gorgeous! yummy I want one! Funny how the tried and true when given a different hue, is the one you want again.

You got me excited about a rainbow! You must be good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rainbows are beautiful. Lovely picture. Great stuff.

Posted 12 Years Ago


After the rain, the sun appears
Casting a mysterious mist
And there it sits, in the sky, a rainbow

Pretty poem! It makes me feel relaxed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked the description of "deep, intriguing indigo." The repetition of "a rainbow/the rainbow" is great too. A really good poem! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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~ Stefanie ~
~ Stefanie ~

Dreamland, DE



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