Now She's Gone

Now She's Gone

A Story by Trisha Justice
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My life in a bunch.

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There I stood, in a pool of blood, and I couldn't believe it had just happened like that. Katherine's dead, and it's all my fault. Why didn't I just stay where I was supposed to be? Instead, I had to run off, make Katherine chase me, and look where that lead. The blood with piles of hair all through it. Her blood. Her hair. Her body lying there completely still, drained of all blood... This was my new fate. No escaping it, and honestly... It scared the f**k out of me.

© 2014 Trisha Justice


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Author's Note

Trisha Justice
I will be adding more to this. This is just the introduction, and I will explain what happened later on, but I need to know if you guys like this so far.

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The intro is VERY captivating. Personally, I would avoid using the word "f**k" because it has such a hard sound in it, it kinda broke me out of the story. If that's how you write, though, continue to do so, it is well written for an intro

Posted 10 Years Ago


No ones chasing you. Theyre here to tell it all, give your dumb a*s a heads up, since youre too much of a coward to find out any other way.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 30, 2014
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Trisha Justice
Trisha Justice

Flint, MI



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I'm 16 years old, and I express myself in writing. I usually only write stories about real life things that have happened to me, but sometimes a poem or two will come out. more..

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