down we go

 

One step

At a time they say

Skip a step

And you’ll surely pay

 

One step, two step

Three step, four.

More matter how many you descend

There will always be more

 

If you chance to slip,

and suffer a slight fall

Get up and be thankful

That you can stand up at all.

 

For many have fallen

And never arisen

They lie at the bottom

Hearts bents and spirits broken

Reviews

[Wildecat]

You had me skipping right along, nice write.

[Maximus. R.]

Excellent I think that you ought to make a Hip-hop record next because your poetry does rhyme.
I would suggest if I may that you change "They lie at the bottom" To "They lie at the abyss"