down we go

down we go

A Poem by bettyboo

 

One step
At a time they say
Skip a step
And you’ll surely pay
 
One step, two step
Three step, four.
More matter how many you descend
There will always be more
 
If you chance to slip,
and suffer a slight fall
Get up and be thankful
That you can stand up at all.
 
For many have fallen
And never arisen
They lie at the bottom
Hearts bents and spirits broken

© 2008 bettyboo


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You had me skipping right along, nice write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent I think that you ought to make a Hip-hop record next because your poetry does rhyme.
I would suggest if I may that you change "They lie at the bottom" To "They lie at the abyss"

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I love to write stories, poems, plays, anything. I like to hang out with friends or lime as we trinis say. I write when I'm happy,sad, bored or just plain silly. i like all the genres; fantasy, histor.. more..

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