Seven

This is something I just wrote. I hope that you all enjoy it.

I first met you on a cold, dark winters night,

The moon was above us, shining ever so bright,

It was silent as I looked into your eyes,

We both smiled and found to our surprise,

That love at first sight is something that is real,

Just like me and you and the way you make me feel.

On the second day, we sat close and talked all day,

Up until the time, we both had to go away,

My heart was beating fast and it felt the best,

Cause it felt like it was beating right out my chest,

And was trying to escape and climb into your hands,

Just to show you that I understand.

On the third night, we lay under the stars,

Talking about how in such a short time we've come so far,

And you held my hand, you brought to your chest,

And at that moment, I knew that I was blessed,

Cause you saved me in a way that no-one else could,

I have such a huge smile which makes me feel so good.

On the fourth day, the rain poured from the sky,

And I wiped away your tears as you began to cry,

Cry your tears of happiness as we began to kiss,

And we both agreed, we were the only one each-other missed,

I was falling and you were my safety net,

I wasn't ready to lose you, no I’m giving up yet.

On the fifth night, you said you had to go away,

I asked you when, you said the very next day,

I didn't know what to do as my life was crumbling apart,

But I whispered in your ear ‘you’ll always have my heart’,

Then you turned around and walked off into the dark,

And I was broken, Was I losing that spark?

On the sixth day, you packed your stuff and turned to me,

You yelled into the sky, ‘why couldn't you have let us be?’,

We both fell to the ground, and broke into tears,

Cause this was the one thing that we both feared,

You got into the car, you drove away from the town,

And the once happy face, was a face overcome by frowns.

On the seventh night, I came chasing after to you,

Because I never said that I was in love with you,

I tracked you down, it took months but I didn't care,

Cause all I wanted was you to be right there,

And I cried more once I found you,

Because to my surprise, you had found somebody new. 

Reviews

[Lana Bimbi]

I don't think I've written a review before and I have no idea what I should be saying but what does that matter when all I can say is that I love, love, love, love this. Well done :)