Beauty is in the eye of the beholder!

So i found this on my old computer, it was wrote in 2009!

Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder,

You may not be the most beautiful girl i know,

But that doesn't matter because,

You make me feel something i've never felt before.

Plus the way you make me feel,

The way you make me laugh, smile and strive,

The way you comfort me when i'm down,

Makes you the most beautiful girl alive. 

Can't you feel and can't you hear,

My heart beating right out of my chest?

Don't you know that out of all the girls i know,

You're the most amazing, yeah you're the best. 

Like an angel from heaven,

You swooped down and took my off my feet,

You somehow made my heart melt,

By turning up this lovers heat.

Let's a nice and a long walk,

Right down memory lane,

Thinking about our first kiss,

Which took place in the winters rain. 

But something happened this morning,,

Something i witnessed on my own,

I woke up in my bed,

All this was a dream, i was alone. 

Reviews

[Aya]

I like this, you're fluent and what a nice romantic poem! Most beautiful dream