Thinking Of You

More song lyrics i wrote. I hope you enjoy them! :)

You have the most beautiful smile,

That i have seen in a while,
And your face is the best i've seen,
You are like a beauty queen in a movie scene.

And your hair falls so perfectly,
I guess that's why i want you so badly,
And your laugh makes me skip a beat,
So please tell me are you feeling this heat?

And the world stops and stares at you,
As you make me laugh, smile and fall for you,
And then the wind blows through your hair,
And thought of not being yours isn't fair,
You have a man who does treat you right,
But that causes me to be awake each night,
Thinking of you, thinking what we could be,
But only if you could see,
Only if you could that i am the man for you.

I am mesmerised by the way you walk,
And even more when you start to talk,
You're so perfect you bring a tear to my eye,
Cause your eyes shine brighter than stars in the sky.

Without trying you give me butterflies,
And each time more of my heart dies,
Because i know that i can't have you,
Even though i believe what i feel is true.

And the world stops and stares at you,
As you make me laugh, smile and fall for you,
And then the wind blows through your hair,
And thought of not being yours isn't fair,
You have a man who does treat you right,
But that causes me to be awake each night,
Thinking of you, thinking what we could be,
But only if you could see,
Only if you could that i am the man for you.

You have the most beautiful smile,
That i have seen in a while.

And the world stops and stares at you,
As you make me laugh, smile and fall for you,
And then the wind blows through your hair,
And thought of not being yours isn't fair,
You have a man who does treat you right,
But that causes me to be awake each night,
Thinking of you, thinking what we could be,
But only if you could see,
Only if you could that i am the man for you.

Reviews

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I absolutely love love love this! I think we've all had, at least once, that one person who we think is extremely perfect, but we know that we can't ever have. The littlest things that that person does can just leave you smiling for weeks.. It's incredible. This song is beautiful, I really like it, and how you can feel the longing that you have for that girl in every single word that you wrote. Absolutely amazinggggg job with this (:

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*first look at lyrics*
DAMN!....I mean...no wait that it what I mean! DAMN!

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That was soooo nice!~~~ VOOOOOT!!!!!!! >///< lol XD Nice poem, it had a great flow and it rhymed....I- I- liked that too *-* lol XD no but overall flippin wicked job! :D For some reason I was laughing (not in a bad way, but in way it was like ha! someone say that to me psssssh hahahahahaha! XD) i was laughing like nyehhehehehehe XD OKAY! OFF TOPIC! GAWD I REALLY GOTTA STOP DOING THAT.....d****t this review is waaaaaaaaaay to long....must stop!

[Moon]

This is lovely and sweet ! Thank you for sharing .

[Alexa Tasch]

This is sweet! It reminds me of some of my favorite love songs!

[C.C. Marx]

Very sweet, it kinda reminds me of "Just the Way You Are" by Bruno Mars

[Marissa Brazzell]

This is very romantic. it is a very good poem. keep up the good work.

[Erinne S.]

I liked this! Especially the fact that you repeated the one stanza, it just brought the whole piece together :)
'mesmerised' This word is actually spelled 'mesmerized'

~Erinne

[beautiful dreamer]

aw how sweet. who ever you wrote this for is a really lucky girl :)

[}Echo{]

This is really sweet. I really like this. I like the flow and emotion of this. It's really great. :)