We're Good Together

We're Good Together

A Poem by DarrinReay
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This is a song i wrote for my ex when we were together. It is about the first day we met. I hope you enjoy it.

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I want you to say that you love me,
I want to say that i love you too,
I want you to say we're good together,
And that you always knew,
Cause i dream of having our first kiss,
Underneath the mistletoe,
And we are in a special place,
A place where no-one will know,
Then we can have our happy ever after,
And live our lives however we can,
You can be my only women,
I can be your only man,
You can be my only women,
I can be your only man.

VERSE 1
It was a cold and windy day and i saw you standing there,
You looked so god damn beautiful as the wind blew through your hair,
You wore a denim jacket and a these of black designer jeans,
You smiled at me and it looked like a ray of bright sun beams,
I knew that when i saw you it was just like love at first sight,
Then the cold and windy day turned to heat with a bright light.

CHORUS

VERSE 2
We started to walk towards the run down bus stop,
I remember feeling like i was taking a great big hop,
We sat and talked and had a laugh and everything was great,
I had not only found a lover but i had found a best mate,
I showed you a picture of my new born nephew,
Then i realised that you are a perfect girl of the many few.

CHORUS

VERSE 3
We went to the pictures and ate popcorn and ice cream,
And as the scary bits came on we jumped but didn't scream,
I kept looking at you and trying to help myself understand,
How i was falling for you and how i just wanted to hold your hand,
And when the movie finished we stood up and left the place,
And as we left i had this great big smile on my face.

CHORUS 

VERSE 4
We got the bus home and we were joking with eachother,
I kept wondering to myself if we would ever end up together,
Then came the final stop and you had to wait for your bus to arrive,
And i couldn't remember a time when i felt so much alive,
Then your bus had came and you gave me a hug goodbye,
Secretely i never wanted you to leave and you coulf of seen it in my eye.

BRIDGE
Now we are together and everything is perfect,
You have made me a happier man,
I promise with all my heart i will do all i can,
To make you happy,
We have the best conversattions,
You make me laugh and you make me smile,
Thankyou for curing the pain that had been here for a while,
That had been here for a while.

© 2012 DarrinReay


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i love it. sometimes i wish people would think of me in that way.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful! I love this. It's really really great. Awesome write. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Nice story and well described. I would like to see a better economy of words to make the description but the point got across and was enjoyable to read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


DarrinReay

12 Years Ago

thank you very much!
Beautifully written song! Well done

~Erinne

Posted 12 Years Ago


DarrinReay

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
aw how beautiful i love songs :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


DarrinReay

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)
Wow, I wish I could hear it. The words flow together so nicely. I bet it would sound beautiful. Great write~!

Posted 12 Years Ago


DarrinReay

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)
This is a beautiful song Darrin, I would love to hear it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


DarrinReay

12 Years Ago

thank you very much! :)
 Tasha

12 Years Ago

You're very welcome

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Added on November 25, 2012
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Washington, Tyne and Wear, United Kingdom



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