Best I Ever Had

When i look back it’s funny,

Cause i must have been so mad,
That a girl like you,
Could be the best i ever had.

A girl who brought me down,
A girl who would hurt me,
I thank god for the day,
When i finally got free.

And no i don’t miss you,
I just miss what we had,
Because believe it or not,
You were the best i ever had.

The walks along the beach,
And the kisses in the rain,
Make me remember all the good times,
But don’t take away the pain.

Remember when you said you loved me,
But then you kissed that other lad?
And even after that,
You were the best i ever had.

The world where we live in,
You can’t believe a word people say,
I guess that is the main reason,
I push so many people away.

I never used to be like that,
Until you drove me mad,
But i guess i’ll always miss you,
Cause you were the best i ever had.

Reviews

[Marissa Brazzell]

so far this is my favorite poem by you. i am here to talk if you ever need anyone to talk to.

[For Worse]

I like this poem. Great work.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I think this is my favorite part, although it's so bittersweet..

"The walks along the beach,
And the kisses in the rain,
Make me remember all the good times,
But don’t take away the pain.

Remember when you said you loved me,
But then you kissed that other lad?
And even after that,
You were the best i ever had. "

I'm glad that you got free from her though, and I hope you find someone better, so that whoever you wrote this about is no longer the best you ever had. Beautiful, sad poem. Great job expressing the emotions too.

[JiDonnelly]

A little repetitive in my prospective Darrin, not the piece
but just how you have so many with the same meaning I expect it now and although
it is a beautiful piece, I want to read something new.

-JiDonnelly'

[Moon]

Heart breaking . It hurts when your partner treats you like s**t . I can relate to this . Well done ! Another great piece .

[Erinne S.]

Wow... a very intriguing poem. You can definitely feel the pain of heartbreak pouring out of every word and stanza.

In your second to last stanza I would recommend taking out the word 'people' in the last line cause you used that word in the second line and you would know what you are referring too, it also helps with the flow in that stanza.

Other than that you did an excellent job!

~Erinne

[Alexa Tasch]

Aw this is so sweet! and sad too! Heart break can be hard to handle but you chaneled this emotion into a beautifully written poem! I loved it

[gnafla]

nice flow. i really like it!