Dear Father

I haven't lost my father but this is a poem i wrote for one my friends who unfortunately lost her father!

Dear father,
It’s been a week since you’ve been gone,
And my world is still filled,
Will this darkness that no-one,
Can take away,
Cause this still does not feel true,
But i just want to say,
I still miss you and i love you.

Dear father,
I had a dream about you last night.
And i can’t get rid of the pain,
Cause i don’t have the will to fight,
I see you everywhere,
And every time i close my eyes,
I see your laugh and smile,
And it always gives me a surprise.


Dear father,
When will see i you again?
Cause i just want you,
To come and take away this pain,
I miss your hugs and your love,
But i still know that you,
Are watching over me as an angel from above.

Dear father,
I see your star shining in the sky,
And it’s the only thing that has the power,
To stop making me cry,
It shines a light through my window,
It shines a light right on my face,
And i know we will meet again,
In an unfamiliar place.


Dear father,
I can’t wait to see you,
And i have a smile on my face,
Although it doesn’t feel true,
I can’t wait,
No i just can’t wait no more,
For when you welcome me,
In your arms at heavens door.

Reviews

[Marissa Brazzell]

sad, but i loved it a lot.

[♋ Iris ♋]

This is a real nice momentum for your friend's father. A great write with imagery and genuine feelings. I love it. keep up the good writing~!

[JiDonnelly]

I love your natural flow perfect way of putting things.
This is totally cute.

You were a gift to co-write with(:

-JiDonnelly'

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

This is so beautiful and touching.. Even though I've never lost a parent, I've lost a few loved ones who I was close to and it really hurts. I think you did a great Jon of capturing the emotion, the mourning, the sadness, the hope that she will get to see her father again.. Beautiful job!

[Kylie Levy]

Beautiful and touching. End of Story.

[Moon]

This is very touching . I have never lost a parent , but I do know how painful losing a loved one can be .

[Rorenzu]

I can relate to this :( My father passed away when i was just 12...

[Tazz S.H.]

Awwww this is so touching

[Emma Pond]

:( This was beautiful and even though I haven't lost my mother or father, I could still feel the pain of going through it just from reading this. x

[C.C. Marx]

wonderful, I have a friend who lost a mother and I sympathize for your friend!