Suicide

There was a girl that i used to know,
She was hurting everyday,
All that she really wanted,
Was for the pain to go away.

Then one night she wrote a letter to her family,
Saying she would always be by their side,
She grabbed and tied the noose,
And committed suicide.

The effect it had on others was overwhelming,
Cause it hurt a lot of them more than you'd know,
And if you really think about it,
It really just goes to show.

That everybody in the world is loved,
Everybody has someone by their side,
But it doesn't change the fact that some lies,
Caused this girl to commit suicide.

Now all that they can ever think about,
Everyday and twenty four seven,
Is the lies that caused her hurt,
And caused this girl to enter heaven.

You can't believe what you're told,
Because most of it isn't true,
And the lies hurt other people,
Oh if you only knew.

Reviews

[Faffy]

the thing that i love about this is how smoothly you make this stanza flow

Then one night she wrote a letter to her family,
Saying she would always be by their side,
She grabbed and tied the noose,
And committed suicide.

its not like a slowed moment that alot of peopl emake it but it just quickly goes over it and it creates an eery feeling

KOODOOS

-Roshan