Can't Spell Us Without U

Can't Spell Us Without U

A Poem by DarrinReay
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Hope you like it!

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I wish that my dreams would come true,
Cause i always dream about you.

And if i could just hold you today,
I'd say the words i always wanted to say,

I'd tell you how much you mean to me,
And that you were the one who set me free.

From the hell that i was trapped in,
And you were the one who believed in.

Believed in us and believed in our love,
You flew into my life like an angel from above.

And i know that we are true,
Cause you can't spell us without 'U'.

© 2012 DarrinReay


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DrD
Now you are basing work around a catchy theme that gives life to words. I would prefer some less traditional rhyming but the context is solid and I enjoyed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


DarrinReay

12 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
I 'awwww' ed at the title and had to come read haha

Super cute, smiled the entire time. Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


DarrinReay

12 Years Ago

aw thank you! :)
I love the poem but not the last line and title, too corny for me,the interior is top
notch.

Posted 12 Years Ago


DarrinReay

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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DarrinReay
DarrinReay

Washington, Tyne and Wear, United Kingdom



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