Can't Spell Us Without U

Hope you like it!

I wish that my dreams would come true,
Cause i always dream about you.

And if i could just hold you today,
I'd say the words i always wanted to say,

I'd tell you how much you mean to me,
And that you were the one who set me free.

From the hell that i was trapped in,
And you were the one who believed in.

Believed in us and believed in our love,
You flew into my life like an angel from above.

And i know that we are true,
Cause you can't spell us without 'U'.

Reviews

[dunnia]

this is so beautiful....i love it

[DarrinReay]

Thank you! :)

[Dupur Mitra]

great

[DarrinReay]

Thank you!

[Moon]

So sweet ! Great job

[DarrinReay]

Thank you! :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

yes cute is the word..pretty cool write..you do need to watch the syllable count though..it is not hard to do just use a few alternative words

[DarrinReay]

Thank you :)

[afra]

awww cute write

[DarrinReay]

Thank you :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

This poem is so sweet and it basically oozes love.. It's soooo full of emotion and love, I can totally relate to this whole poem, I love it. If I had to choose a facorite part, I'd probably choose...

"Believed in us and believed in our love,
You flew into my life like an angel from above.

And i know that we are true,
Cause you can't spell us without 'U'."

Beautiful job(:

[DarrinReay]

Thank you very much! :) i'm glad you enjoyed it! (:

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

No problem, &i did(:

[Marissa Brazzell]

nice job

[DarrinReay]

Thank you!

[C.C. Marx]

Short and sweet but still meaningful...nice job :)

[DarrinReay]

Thank you very much! :)

[Emma Pond]

Aw I love this :) it's cute but really meaningful and ahh I just love it! X

[DarrinReay]

Thank you very much! :) x

[JiDonnelly]

This is simply beautiful, really really adorable.
I love the ending although I think you meant to say "Cause you can't spell us without U* instead of "Cause you can't spell us with U".
Maybe I'm wrong, nevertheless, I can't fault you.

-JiDonnelly'

[DarrinReay]

Thank you very much,
and yeah that's what i meant! i'll change that now :)

[JiDonnelly]

ahh Perfect.