Where The Hell Are You Now?

I post too many poems/songs about love and everything but i guess that's just who i am! Comment on what you think (:

We chatted and talked for many many days,

And i wouldn't leave you alone or go away

And then you became the girl i'd used to miss,

And then it all changed with just one kiss,

It was in the cinema while watching movie,

I turned to you and you were all i could see,

I closed my eyes and i leant in,

And i knew for sure it's when our love would begin,

We got together and it was so great,

You weren't just my girl but you were my best mate,

You made me smile when i felt down,

You got rid of the pain and rid of the frown,

But now we have grew apart somehow,

So please tell me,

Just please tell me,

Where the hell are you now? 

Reviews

[rnuff]

This is really good and wonderful, i enjoyed this

[Kim]

I really like the flow and message of this poem. It has a good combination of different ideas/emotions and it's really well done.

My editing suggestions: you should add "a" in "while watching *a* movie" and I think you should use "leaned" instead of "leant."

Great work! :) Write about love all you want because you're good at it.

[DarrinReay]

Thank you,
And i was meant to put an 'a' in, was a mistake! :) but Thank you for the lovely feedback!
-DR.

[Aurora Dawn]

I love this poem,
I think we have al felt this wat at one point or another :/
Really good job.

[DarrinReay]

it sucks to feel this way:/
Thank you!
-DR.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

This is beautiful(: you did a great job with this, and I love the story that it tells. thanks for sharing.

[DarrinReay]

Thank you! it's my pleasure, love to share my work!
-DR.

[C.C. Marx]

I think the reason you write poems about love is because you're good at writing them, don't stop!

[DarrinReay]

Thank you very much!
-DR.

[Tasha]

I love your poems and songs about love. I enjoyed this as well. It will all work out.

[DarrinReay]

Thank you, I'm hoping it does!
-DR.

[Tasha]

You're welcome, it will.