Superman

This is one of the first things I ever wrote and it's that bad I can't stop laughing (': so I had to share it to you lot!

It is time to put on a show
Be my Juliet ill be your Romeo,
Ill tear the world apart,
Just to be able to swap our hearts,
And promise me you won't leave,
Ill be Adam an you can be eve,
And then we won't need to panic,
And then girl just like the titanic,
When we will go nobody knows,
I can be your jack and you can be my rose,
And we will meet again,
I'm your superman you are my Lois lane.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

it is so bad it is good....I think there is great humour in corny rhymes..I used to try it all the time when I was younger....If it is made out to be so obvious it will be guaranteed to get a smile...I think I may try it out myself again..Thanks