The Atom - Opening Scene

The Atom - Opening Scene

A Screenplay by Darrin Reay
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After a cataclysmic explosion destroys a great city, an elite force is sent into the ruins to investigate, but what they find is the nightmare from the minds of two brothers.

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                                       "THE ATOM"
               FADE IN:
               EXT. ROCKY CLIFFS - DAY
               We make our way over the large, dominating cliffs as the sun
               in the sky beams down on the evergreens. 
               Then there's a noise. Growing to a peak as it gets louder. We
               come to hear that the noise is traffic. Muffled voices can be
               heard until --
               A large city comes into view. Two skyscrapers stand tall in
               the centre, towering over everything. This is the great city
               of ROYALRICH.
               EXT. ROYALRICH CITY STREET - CONTINUOUS
               Rush hour. Thousands of people walking down the street every
               minute -- talking on their phones, bumping into each other
               and the occasional argument breaks out. 
               Daylight suddenly turns into moonlight and the people from
               the streets vanish. It's like a ghost town. 
               An engine roars through the street as a BLACK VAN pulls up at
               the side of the road. The back doors open, THREE MEN exit. 
               The men all wear BALACLAVA'S with SILENCED MACHINE GUNS at
               arms length. 
               They run up a flight of concrete stairs, towards two large
               wooden doors. Writing engraved into the wood: ROYALRICH CITY
               BANK. 
               Before reaching the doors, they immediately turn right and
               rush around to the back of the building -- then up a flight
               of metal stairs.
               EXT. ROYALRICH CITY BANK, ROOFTOP - CONTINUOUS
               The leader, WILSON, rushes towards a SKYLIGHT while the other
               two, SMITH and REV, take care of the cameras. 
               The skylight opens and Wilson drops rope down to the floor
               below.
                                    WILSON
                         Time?
                                    REV
                         Five minutes.
                                    SMITH
                         Let's do this. 
               The three of them fast rope through the skylight. We are now
               inside --
               INT. ROYALRICH CITY BANK - CONTINUOUS
               Automatic lights switch on, filling the screen with life. REV
               and SMITH move to take care of the cameras inside. 
               WILSON heads to the doors of the bank, goes into his rucksack
               and removes two devices -- carefully handling them -- and
               places them on either side of the door. 
               ON DEVICE, red lines shoot across each other, soon turning
               invisible. 
               He turns, picks up his bag and heads to meet REV and SMITH.
                                    WILSON
                         The devices are in place, let's hit
                         the vault.
                                    REV
                               (alarmed)
                         Sh, do you hear that?
               There's silence in the air... then there's a faint sound
               which accelerates rapidly into beeping until there is an
               EXPLOSION.
               A set of doors at the far end of the bank blow open and THREE
               MEN in HEAVY BODY-ARMOR rush into the room.
               These are THE SHADOWS.
                                    GHOST
                         Stay where you are, we have this
                         place completely surrounded!
               There's a lot of tension, and a small pause. 
               Wilson draws his gun, opens fire and The Shadows duck for
               cover. 
               CUT TO:
               EXT. ROYALRICH CITY STREET - NIGHT
               POLICE CARS, ANIMAL PATROL and SWAT VANS surround the bank.
               Their weapons all pointed at the bank.
               A HELICOPTER flies overhead followed by a NEWS HELICOPTER.
               CUT BACK TO:
               INT. ROYALRICH CITY BANK - NIGHT
               The Shadows hide behind the counters, readying their weapons.
               GHOST -- the captain -- goes to his comms unit.
                                    GHOST
                               (into comms unit)
                         HQ, this is Ghost. Hostiles are
                         armed and dangerous, I repeat, they
                         are armed and dangerous. Do we have
                         the green light to shoot? 
                                    HQ (O.S.)
                               (through comms unit)
                         Negative, Ghost. Hostiles are in
                         possession of the information we
                         require. They are to be captured
                         alive, HQ out.
               Ghost removes his comms unit, his face full of anger.
                                    GHOST
                         S**t!
               His team member -- SHADE -- turns to him.
                                    SHADE
                         It's three of them against the
                         entire RoyalRich police force, they
                         aren't getting away.
                                    GHOST
                         Yeah, you're right.
               The third team member -- SOUL -- approaches.
                                    SOUL
                         Let's take these a******s down.
                                    GHOST
                               (to Shade)
                         Partner, you flank right.
                               (to Soul)
                         You flank left.
                               (pause)
                         I'll get their attention. Once you
                         have reached their position,
                         release the flashbomb and let's end
                         this, tonight!
               The team nod their heads as they follow the orders. Shade
               heads to the right, staying as low as possible and Soul heads
               to the left, doing exactly the same. 
               Ghost stands up, fires a couple of shots and then ducks back
               for cover.
                                    GHOST (CONT'D)
                         Wilson, give yourself up. This is
                         over!
               Wilson pauses, he panics before removing his balaclava.
                                    GHOST (CONT'D)
                         Come in with us, tell us who you
                         sold the Atom to. You don't want to
                         be responsible for the death of
                         thousands of innocent people!
                                    WILSON
                         If there is one thing that I've
                         learned in my line of work,
                         captain, is that there are no
                         innocent people.
                                    GHOST
                         Tell me who has the weapon, tell me
                         what their target is!
               Wilson open fires at Ghost, just missing his head with the
               bullets. 
               Shade moves forward, he grips his gun and aims but a piece of
               debris smashes against the ground.
               Wilson, Rev and Smith hear. They turn to Shade.
               Time pauses. Everything goes silent as heavy heartbeats can
               be heard.
               Before Shade has a chance to react, Wilson and his team open
               fire. The body armor blocks most of the bullets but one
               bullet shoots through his neck.
               Shade drops to the floor, dead.
               Soul watches in horror, his eyes widen. He grips his gun,
               jumps from behind cover...
                                    SOUL
                         No!
               ... And open fires at the three men, shooting Smith through
               the head and Rev through his shoulder.
               Wilson ducks behind cover but then jumps out and fires one
               bullet which hits the body armor, pierces it and hits Soul in
               the heart. 
               Ghost watches in horror as his team is killed before his
               eyes.
                                    GHOST
                               (into comms unit)
                         All units, converge on the bank, we
                         have officers down!
               CUT TO:
               EXT. ROYALRICH CITY STREET - NIGHT
               All of the officers head towards the bank in perfect
               formation, their guns ready.
               Two officers approaches the bank door carrying a BATTERING
               RAM. They swing it and the doors smash open. 
               One of the officers goes to fire but a hand slams the gun
               down.
                                    OFFICER
                               (whispering)
                         They are to be captured alive,
                         officer.
               That officer walks through the set of doors. The red lines
               appear brightly and the officer is cut into tiny pieces.
               The rest of the officers shoot through the archway but the
               bullets are disintegrated by the lasers. 
                                    SWAT OFFICER
                         Bank is booby trapped, everybody
                         around to the back!
               The officers make their way around the back entrance.
               CUT TO:
               INT. ROYALRICH CITY BANK - NIGHT
               Debris smashes against Ghosts face, bullets just missing him.
                                    HQ (O.S.)
                               (through comms unit)
                         HQ to Ghost. The bank is booby
                         trapped, exit the building and meet
                         SWAT.
               Ghost watches his fallen teammates, he shakes his head.
                                    GHOST
                         Like hell.
               He points his gun around the corner, closes one eye and aims.
               He takes a deep breath and FIRES. The bullet clips Revs leg.
               Rev falls to the floor, screaming in agony.
               Ghost then swings right, keeping out of sight of Wilson. He
               reaches Shades body.
               He searches his body until he removes a GRENADE. He pulls the
               pin an throws it at Wilson and the wounded man.
               BOOM! They are both blinded by a FLASH GRENADE. Wilson
               stumbles back, disorientated. 
               Ghost rushes towards Wilson, smacks him in the face and kicks
               him to the floor. He turns to the wounded man.
               He handcuffs his hands together but Wilson approaches behind.
               He throws a punch which is missed, then another. And another,
               then another. All of which are missed.
               Ghost swings a punch, connects hard and pushes Wilson against
               the wall.
               He throws a five-punch combination and deals one kick which
               knocks Wilson back against the device, cutting him into tiny
               pieces.
                                    GHOST (CONT'D)
                         Yeah... rest in pieces you son of a
                         b***h.
               Ghost approaches the wounded man.
                                    GHOST (CONT'D)
                               (into comms unit)
                         HQ, this is Ghost. Wilson is down,
                         I repeat, Wilson is down. We have
                         one survivor, I am bringing him in
                         for interrogation.
                                    HQ (O.S.)
                               (through comms unit)
                         Copy that, Ghost. ETA for
                         helicopter is --
               There's static -- silence. The comms are offline, as is all
               electricity. 
                                    GHOST
                         What the hell is going on?
               CUT TO:
               EXT. ROYALRICH CITY - NIGHT
               The entire city goes dark. Nothing can be seen apart from the
               odd flashlight as people make their way onto the streets.
               CUT BACK TO:
               ROYALRICH CITY BANK - NIGHT
               There's a rumbling noise. Ghost approaches the window and
               looks towards a huge skyscraper in the distance.
               Ghost POV, there's an object falling towards it. It's a
               MISSILE. It hits the skyscraper and --
               -- BOOM!
               A point of light fires into a NUCLEAR BLAST. Wind, dust and
               light passes through the city, destroying everything in its
               path as the mushroom cloud rises. 
               The cloud of smoke reaches the bank, filling the screen with
               BLACKNESS.
               CUT TO BLACK.

© 2013 Darrin Reay


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Darrin Reay
Darrin Reay

Washington, Tyne and Wear, United Kingdom



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"Hope is a good thing, maybe the best of things, and no good thing ever dies" - The Shawshank Redemption. My name is Darrin Reay. I am eighteen years old, from a small town called Washington which .. more..

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