The perfect murderA Chapter by hoganIf you plan the perfect murder make sure you are not the victim.The perfect murder George Foulton was in
his early forties and his career was blossoming, but he was a deeply unhappy
man. The main reason he was unhappy, in
fact the only reason he was unhappy was because of Jane Foulton, his wife of
just over twenty years. “George I am going to
my book reading group now, I won’t be home until quite late, we are discussing
the closing chapters of Francis Heston’s latest novel. Make sure everything is tidy, lock all the
doors and windows, check the heating controls and make sure you leave the
hallway light on for me, you know how I hate to walk into a dark house,”
instructed the familiar and grating voice, of his once beloved. “Of course I will
Jane, don’t I always do as you ask,” he replied, knowing beforehand he would
automatically turn off all the lights and leave his red stained wine glass on
the coffee table. The comforting clunk
of the front door being pulled, into its perfectly fitting frame, reassured him
he would now have a few precious hours to himself. He did not hate her, but he treasured the
brief periods of his free time he was not under her control. He sat for a few minutes, letting his mind
drift and contemplating how he should use his few hours leave from the highly
ritualized institution, his life had become. He thought about
Glenda, his mistress. Glenda was
everything his wife was not. She was
very plain, she would never attract a second glance from any passing man, in
fact he doubted she received any first glances.
She was submissive, her lack of confidence still surprised him, but she
was also incredibly passionate. He was
still not sure how it happened. It was
at the annual work conference he went on.
After the formalities of the evening meal, with its accompanying
professional etiquette, the tradition of migrating to the hotel bar followed as
the standard ritual. He was bored and
noticed her because she was alone, she was sitting on one of those high stools
near the bar and looked as sad as he felt.
He introduced himself to her and was surprised to learn she worked just
three offices from his, he had never noticed before. They talked, they shared a few jokes and then
he asked her if she wanted to come up to his room, she hesitated, staring at
him for several seconds. She then stood
up and without saying a word waited for him to escort her to his room. He had only slept
with Glenda four times, but on each occasion it was memorable because she
clearly demonstrated she really wanted him.
He had thought of leaving Jane, but he could not even begin to contemplate
the repercussions that would occur, if he gave the slightest hint he did not
want to be with her. He switched on the
television and scanned through the main channels he liked to watch. There was a film on later, titled The Perfect
Murder, it crossed his mind that would be a solution to his problems. He was restless and
reached for his tablet. He began to
cruise the net, not really sure of what he was looking for. The news featured a story about the sudden
and unexplained death of woman who was linked to a well-known celebrity. There were rumours she might have been
murdered, but the autopsy had proved inconclusive as to the cause of
death. He wondered to himself if it was
possible to murder someone and get away with it. It was a few minutes later
he found himself flicking through the search results obtained by asking the
question, how do you commit the perfect murder?
The first few articles were a waste of time, but the one he was now
reading was very different. It started
by telling him that if he was serious, he was already committing a grave error
in searching through sites like this.
The article then suggested he should bookmark the three links given
below and after using them, make sure he fully deleted them. He bookmarked the three links, but did not
have the courage to open them. It was two weeks
later, he was scheduled to meet two clients in the afternoon, but both had
cancelled at very short notice. He rang
Glenda from his office phone and a short while later they were fulfilling their
passionate desires at her place. He must
have got carried away because he was now late.
He never came home late without calling his wife first, now he was 45
minutes late and his mind was scrambling for appropriate excuses. “George you know I
have a book club meeting tonight and I will not leave the house before you have
come home. If I don’t remind you of what
you need to do, then I know you won’t do it,” scolded Jane, using the full
magnificence of her grating voice to shred the remaining strands of his
tattered defiance. She had spent the
next 20 minutes instructing him on the four basic tasks he needed to do, the
last being to ignore the light switch for the hallway, the one he always
flicked off as he went up the stairs.
Now she was gone, he reached for his tablet and opened the first link he
had bookmarked two weeks earlier. The first link was a
scientific paper which examined the mechanisms of a group of neural toxins. The work detailed the chemical reactions that
took place and how the ability of certain nerves to transmit signals was
inhibited over a period of time. At the
end of the paper, details of processes to produce these neural inhibitors were
given. He clicked on the second link and
found he was looking at a set of notes detailing the synthesis of certain
chemical compounds, the name were familiar from the first link. The third link was to a chemical company, it
contained a list of compounds and details as to whether the substances were
restricted or not. Over the next hour
George sat with a pencil and piece of paper, he carefully worked through the
logic contained in the three links and realised he could easily procure the
basic ingredients needed to make the toxins.
He searched for the toxins on the net and suddenly, one article stood
out from all the others. One of the
toxins not only proved to be fatal if administered alongside caffeine, but all
traces of it disappeared from the body after just two hours. The next morning
George performed his usual morning ritual, he made tea for both of them, one
sugar in his and none in Jane’s. He
carefully carried the two identical bone china mugs, set on a melamine tray
decorated with brightly coloured flowers, and set them down on his wife’s
dressing table. Jane considered it very
uncouth to drink in bed, but yearned for a cup of tea as soon as soon as she
woke in the morning. He offered her the
left hand mug, which she took and then seated herself in her bedroom chair. “You have given me
yours again, can’t you ever get it right, you know how much I detest the taste
of sugar in my tea,” she ejected, along with a trickle of tea, which flowed
onto her chin. “Keith and Emma are
coming to dinner tonight and I want you to make sure you serve the coffees to
the right people, you always manage to get it wrong,” she added in her normal
grating tones. That afternoon he
decided to order the first ingredient he needed to make his toxin, he used one
of the office computers and intended to pay using his credit card. The substance he ordered was commonly used to
improve the health of potted plants, which his wife devotedly attended to in
their house. As he registered his
details a message appeared, it welcomed him back to his account and politely
asked if he wished to make any further orders.
He panicked and shut down the computer.
Could someone know what he was planning?
It was a stupid idea, he would forget all about it. Keith and Emma were
entertained throughout the evening and he successfully managed to serve
everybody the wrong coffee liquors at the end of the meal. “I am so sorry, it
seems George is incapable of performing the simplest of tasks, how he managed
to progress so high in management at work, is beyond me,” said Jane, sweetly to
their guests. Once again she humiliated
him in front of friends, he wished he had the courage to try and order the
ingredients again. Over the next three
weeks he found he had more time to let his mind explore his deep rooted
feelings, Jane attended at least two book club meetings each week. Once again the thoughts stirred within him to
pursue the lethal toxin route to solving his problems, but he failed to have enough
courage and slipped over to Glenda’s for a snatched hour of erotic release
instead. It was on a Saturday
morning that events took a new turn. “George, there is
something important I need to discuss with you later, I can’t talk now because
Keith and Emma are coming over for a meal at two this afternoon. Don’t worry I have everything sorted, please
just try to make sure everything is served correctly this time,” she stated
clearly, with only a hint of grating. He
was confused, they never entertained anyone at two in the afternoon, he could
already hear the sweet voice of Jane tearing down the remnants of his
masculinity as he delivered the whiskey liquor to Keith instead of Emma. They sat down to a
simple buffet meal and the conversation flowed politely as normal. It was Jane who deviated from the standard
protocol. “Emma, Keith, I have
asked you over this afternoon because I have something very important to tell
George, but I am not sure how he will deal with it and I want to have mutual
friends here for support.” George
listened, but no one dropped the proverbial pin. “I am a patient and
loving woman, but I have met someone else and I do not want to be with George
any longer. I have met a man from the
book club and I know I want to be with him.
I have wanted to tell George for the last few weeks, but I could not
find the courage to do so.” George felt his heart
race; this was it, the means to freedom.
He knew he should appear upset, but his innermost instinct was to jump
in the air and scream with delight. “Maybe I should make
some coffee,” he said, trying to sound upset. “George, let me make
the coffee, you can carry them in after I have made them,” replied Jane, in the
softest and kindest voice he had heard for years. Jane disappeared into
the kitchen and George was left, trying to sound upset, with Keith and Emma. “What am I going to
do without her, she is everything to me, Life will never be the same,” he
weakly whimpered. “It will all work out
in a few months from now George, it always does, look at how Steve is doing
these days,” said Keith, in a pseudo sympathetic tone that made George cringe
inside. “George, the coffees
are ready, please can you carry them through for me,” chimed Jane sweetly. As he entered the kitchen she gave him
detailed instruction as to which was which, of the four identical coffee liquor
glasses. He paused a while and made a
clear mental note of the exact position of each glass. “He is taking his
time, the coffee will be cold by the time he gets here, I hope he is not
searching for rat poison to put in mine,” said Jane, jokingly. “Here we are,” said
George, now totally confident that this time he would deliver the correct
liquor to each person. He carefully set
each glass down, exactly as Jane had instructed him. “George you have
given me your coffee, Keith, Emma have you got the correct one?” “Yes,” they replied
in perfect synchronization. “Jane if you think
you have my coffee, it is because you muddled them up. I know that I have given everyone the coffee
you told me to give them,” he snapped, before throwing back the still warm
beverage. “I am sorry for my
husband’s behaviour, I expect he is upset, maybe it is best if you let us talk
for a while. Please come back in about
an hour, George may need some support by then,” said Jane, holding her head
high with the dignity she adored. Keith
and Emma downed the coffees and left. “Now George, listen
very carefully, there is quite a lot I need to tell you and there is not much
time. I have met a man at the book club,
his name is John. He is not as handsome
as you, but he is about 10 years younger and he is very passionate, has no in
inhibitions and is very dominating with me in certain ways. I want to be with him and I will be
soon. You are such a stupid man, maybe
it is because I was cheating on you that I started to check if you were
cheating on me, I don’t know. I found
your research on how to commit the perfect murder George. I kept checking, you didn’t have the balls to
do it, did you? Well George let me tell
you I did. If you had checked out your
history fully you would have seen a lot more research was carried out, before
you ordered all the ingredients. George
you have just drunk a very powerful neural suppressant, with extra
caffeine. At this very moment your motor
control system is closing down. You can
still see me and hear me, but you cannot move and cannot answer me back. In about 20 minutes you will stop breathing
and all signs of the toxins will start to break down once the carbon-dioxide
levels rise. Now what I have done George
is commit the perfect murder, all the evidence is there on your tablet to
suggest it was you, every transaction has been done in your name. Keith and Emma know how easily you muddle the
drinks, it’s just so perfect George. Now
I am going to meet my new lover, I think I will get really excited as he has
me, knowing that I have also killed a man, perfectly. Goodbye George.” Jane walked out of
the house and opened her car door. As
she was half in, half out of the car an old van accelerated and hit the half
open door. Jane was neatly separated
into two halves, one collapsed into the car and the over was spread along the
road. Glenda was waiting
for George to answer his phone, she had just received the news that the addict
she paid earlier had committed the perfect murder. Why was George not answering his phone?
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Added on March 24, 2013 Last Updated on March 24, 2013 Authorhoganblackpool, United KingdomAboutCurrently working on a series of short and contemporary horror stories. Decided to join this site because I have been working on a project for the last fifteen years. Fourteen thinking and one writi.. more..Writing
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