My goodbye to you

And as our hearts melt

As our world changes 

Our souls will crave

What no longer is  

And will never be again

And all I knew

Now is gone

And all I loved 

Will always and forever

 Be with you

And this is and forever will be

My goodbye to you

So goodbye my love

Goodbye my dear

Bless your life

Bless your heart 

Goodbye, goodbye

I say to you

My beloved love

Author's Note

ignore any grammar problems. hope you like it.

Reviews

[wordman]

sounds like the end,does a relationship ever end

[Chris Shaw]

Dignified sadness. That's what I felt when reading your poem. Partings are not often dignified. That's why I liked your poem.

Chris

[Alexandra G.]

Amazing honey, I felt this so much. 💕 xoxo

[Ardra]

Goodbyes are never easy....
Your poem is simple and full of the sadness...

[May]

Thank you for taking your time to read and review my piece.

[creepersjeepers]

I like how simple this is but how much emotion it has.

[May]

Thank you so much. I appreciate your review.

[Wyrn Tiger]

even if the word fails love prevails

[May]

thank you for your reviews

[Aubrey Harrell]

This is fantastic. I almost got teary. It was so simple, yet heartfelt. It’s perfect and honestly who cares about grammical errors when you can write and make those melt away for view.

[May]

thank you so much. I love your review. It means the world to me that you liked it and that it touched you. I just wrote it without thinking twice and I was so impressed with it, I just had to share. thank you for the review.

[Aubrey Harrell]

Your very welcome! You deserve it! ;)