How everything changed

How everything changed

A Poem by May

I was fine
Everything was fine
And then almost suddenly I felt myself falling apart
I watched familiar places change 
I saw how friends became strangers
Feeling how old memories started to blur 
Doubt now starting to surface 
Now questioning everything
The voices in my head louder now than ever before
Impossible to ignore 
I watched carefully how a world I knew so well, expired
Everything now covered by hells fire
Waiting patiently for the unstoppable end 
Wishing desperately for time to stop 
Wanting to catch my breathe 
Trying to remember the rights and wrongs
While seeing how everything changed   
      

© 2018 May


Author's Note

May
ignore grammar problems, hope you like it. Written Tuesday, October 17 2017.

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it is a sad poem, there is the waiting for the end to come, but have to accept it is part of one's life but will it be more bearable if there are no doubts, that you know the wait is over and you have served your purpose? i just wish that if my time will come there will be tangible signs for me to see and know that my time has come. this is only my interpretation of the poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

I love your interpretation. Thank you so much.
sette

6 Years Ago

you are most welcome



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it is a sad poem, there is the waiting for the end to come, but have to accept it is part of one's life but will it be more bearable if there are no doubts, that you know the wait is over and you have served your purpose? i just wish that if my time will come there will be tangible signs for me to see and know that my time has come. this is only my interpretation of the poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

I love your interpretation. Thank you so much.
sette

6 Years Ago

you are most welcome

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