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A Poem by May

My head feels full
It has always been that way
Full of dreams, hopes and goals
Full of creativity and beautiful things
I have always been one with positive thoughts 
One to dream
Big or small it didn't matter
Always wishing and seeing the best of things 
But a cloud is passing by
Almost like and eclipse
It's making everything blurry and so hard to see 
Making me doubt what's in front of me
Filling my heart with worry
Making me feel rage and sorrow
Making me bitter and sad
It's all too much
My head is too full
It's all too much
It's giving me a headache
That I can't escape from 

© 2018 May


Author's Note

May
ignore grammar problems, hope you like it. Written Saturday, October 21 2017

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This was a very sentimental piece that was well written and reminded me of a poem I wrote called, "My Head".
It had such a captivating spell that hooked me from start to finish!
Thank you for your excellent poetry!
If you would like to read my poem, the link is down below, you don't have to read if you don't want to.

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1740902/

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

I wrote this in October, I was in a really bad place emotionally and had no one to talk to so i just.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

6 Years Ago

It was a masterpiece with lots of potential! You are most welcome! And thank you! I really appreciat.. read more



Reviews

This was a very sentimental piece that was well written and reminded me of a poem I wrote called, "My Head".
It had such a captivating spell that hooked me from start to finish!
Thank you for your excellent poetry!
If you would like to read my poem, the link is down below, you don't have to read if you don't want to.

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1740902/

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

I wrote this in October, I was in a really bad place emotionally and had no one to talk to so i just.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

6 Years Ago

It was a masterpiece with lots of potential! You are most welcome! And thank you! I really appreciat.. read more

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