Honestly

Honestly

A Poem by May

Let's be honest
You know what I miss the most about us?
The late night calls,
The work break phone calls,
The random text messages, 
You and I constantly talking.

Why? 
 Because you filled a void.
You made my bad nights into perfect ones.
Made my mornings so very special.
You stoped me from feeling lonely and sad.
You took me away from everything bad
 that happened in the dead of night.
Your voice was my escape from my reality. 
And honestly I miss that.

© 2018 May


Author's Note

May
ignore grammar problems, hope you like it.

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" Because you filled a void.
You made my bad nights into perfect ones.
Made my mornings so very special.
You stoPped me from feeling lonely and sad."

I honestly think this is your best poem yet!
It was something that I think that a lot of us can relate to.
We have all gone through heartbreak and It is in my opinion the worst pain that we can go through.
You have such a unique writing style that is filled with creativity and emotion and it's the writing that makes the readers want to read more from you!
Keep up the great work!

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

That's why I started sharing my work here, because I want to find people, and relate to them and hav.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

6 Years Ago

:) You have great potential! Keep up this incredible work!



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How nice that someone made you feel so special takes a special someone- sometimes we only miss it and appreciate something when it’s gone - wonderful words🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

thank you for taking your rime to review, it is extremely appreciate it.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

My pleasure anytime when I have the time🌹
" Because you filled a void.
You made my bad nights into perfect ones.
Made my mornings so very special.
You stoPped me from feeling lonely and sad."

I honestly think this is your best poem yet!
It was something that I think that a lot of us can relate to.
We have all gone through heartbreak and It is in my opinion the worst pain that we can go through.
You have such a unique writing style that is filled with creativity and emotion and it's the writing that makes the readers want to read more from you!
Keep up the great work!

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May

6 Years Ago

That's why I started sharing my work here, because I want to find people, and relate to them and hav.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

6 Years Ago

:) You have great potential! Keep up this incredible work!

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