him

him

A Poem by live-life-learn
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this is for all the girls/guys who cried themselves to sleep for the ones they thought they loved. just remember that no person who hurts you is worth your tears.

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Once upon a time she had a dream,

He loved her back,

And they lived happily ever after,

now she lies awake at night,

Wondering whats wrong with her,

For him not to feel back,

Was she unintelligent?

Not his type?

Or plain old ugly?

she lays awake at night,

Until her dream will finally come true,

that dream,

never came true.

© 2008 live-life-learn


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I hated every last word of it. The ungrateful way you whine about losing someone you never could've had in the first place, the terrible self-esteem, the tears and the lame 'dreams nevr come true xoxo' s**t was s****y and I hated it all GAH

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful... well described :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 20, 2008

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live-life-learn
live-life-learn

shaunkankoma, MD, Bosnia and Herzegovina



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well i like writing poetry. i only write a story or two when i feel as if i cant find my sence of poetry.i like things most ppl dnt and i see things in a way most ppl cant. more..

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