Dreams

this poem is about what people need to chase.

Dreams are an undone adventure,

dreams bring out your bravery

brings out what u want to happen

or u think is going to happen

dreams are stories

each different in their own way.

with a different plot.

dreams are madical,

and once you see one,

its unbelievable

dreams

they're the one thing millions of people chase

but only thousands catch them

dreams are my emotions.

Reviews

[Kgosi]

dreamz neh... nice piece, it's like it, but you could have so much with it, free your imagination jo, don't write like your boxed in or something... i'm looking forward to reading your works... you're a great writer, just liberate your mind. it's not a critic by the way, it's just that i see a lot of potential in your work.

[Janice Ann]

Dreams...ahh yes...they are what we should all chase...great reminder to us! I liked this piece a lot great job!

JaniceAnn