Her Eyes

Her Eyes

A Poem by 暗い雪

I once looked you in the eye

not knowing how innocent we were

I thought we could try

you could be my lover


you obliterated my heart

I pushed you away

while we were apart

I lost my way


On my knees once again

I looked you in the eye

you only stared back again

I wished to die


Maybe it's for the best

Maybe I failed to see

Life is merely a test

We weren't meant to be


Now I'll never see your beautiful eyes

and your brown hair is but a legend

I'll never forget the bittersweet memories

or the unfortunate end

© 2012 暗い雪


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Painfully sad, but so wise the same time... as you say, "Life is merely a test, We weren't meant to be...

Love still shines utterly beautiful through, enjoyed this piece, thank you.

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


暗い雪

12 Years Ago

No, Thank you for this review. It really means a lot to me. :')

12 Years Ago

You're welcome :') to the humor.... after it :D great job!

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