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A Poem by 暗い雪
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Just thinking at the end of the day, quick stream of conscious

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I remember
The Words
The Face
The Name
The Game
Just a sad memory

© 2012 暗い雪


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an interesting ribbon. . .maybe the last line should read a little differently. Perhaps: memory/a sad. It's quirky and could twist it up a bit. Just a suggestion. Thanks for posting.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 12, 2012
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暗い雪
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