Faint...

Little memories-
short recollections
mean more sometimes
when explained
Someone took
those dreams away...
Only for a while
Now that I
can see them
again, I remember
At times
these stories
seem so vivid
and yet so unclear
As if it were only
just a vision
in this veil of sadness
And for once,
I don't have to
push you further away

Author's Note

What do you think of how the poem was written? (context aside)

Reviews

[Tiffany Blair]

"a vision in this veil of sadness", "i don't have to push you further away".. i understand what you mean.. and how i have missed a good read...:)
and a good write... i feel as if my soul has been let free

[Cam]

Written well in my opinion, I think piecing it together is a great way :)