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This poem is also featured on poetry.com It has one a few Editor's Choice awards as well

A bridge made of waters

Telling you of long ago

Thought being percieved as nothing

A forgotten place that was once known

My poetry is the blood

 

Not far from it's reach

An image beyond sight

Visions of this dream

 

Is my vision's loss

An endless mystery-

It's worst enemy 

That only you can see

 

Journey an endless night

 

Author's Note

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[Butch Decatoria]

"deep thoughts are darker, and the deeper you go
although - one thinks to look for more -
the less one knows"--me


YOU'RE A UNIQUE VOICE WHICH CRIES TO BE LET LOOSE, AND I AM BECOMING MORE OF A FAN EVERY PIECE I READ. DARK THINGS INTRIGUE ME. AND LIGHT MAKES ME FALL IN LOVE, THO' MY DEMONS SEEM TO SABOTAGE WHATEVER LIGHT I GAIN... I DO NOT KNOW IF YOU'RE ANY SIMILAR. I HAVE YET TO OPEN MY COAT TO LET ANYONE SEE, BUT I CAN GLIMPSE ALITTLE OF SOMETHING WITH YOU THAT REMINDS ME.

THE DIALOGUE IS VAGUE YET SAYS MUCH, DON'T CHANGE ANYTHING, BECAUSE I BELIEVE THAT OPINIONS ARE LIKE A******S--EVERYONE'S GOT ONE, JUST DON'T NEED TO GIVE IT (LOL). I HAVE A POEM WITH THE SAME TITLE. GUESS I SHOULD PULL IT OUT AND POST IT. THANKS FOR JOINING MY GROUP. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE - ESPECIALLY THE HOMO-EROTIC ONES.

~PFLUFFER~

[Tiffany Blair]

i like this.. it is very different and deep

[shadadakiya]

very pretty,and deep ,(visions of this dream that only you can see )i sure know what that means very good write

[Prose-full]

this is nice....i feel a very pleasing flow..
great write..and welcome to the cafe..

[Cats Eye]

Wow, beautiful right, love it.

[Cassya77]

I can see why it has won awards, it is most excellent