Senses

A Poem by darkroseX3

Normally I hate haikus, but they're so short, so I don't have to think much when I write it :/

The ice, it burns me.

The heat, it freezes my heart.

Emptiness, it soothes.

© 2009 darkroseX3

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Truly Ross-Wisehart

Wonderful use of opposite ideas. Well done.

~True

Posted 14 Years Ago

Susan14

this is amazing, it has so much f=feeling and emotions in it even though it's a haiku, this is so good! I love the sensory detail put into it, even though this is a very short and simple poem, the thought and images are conveyed very brilliantly, keep up the good work

Posted 15 Years Ago

Momo the Elf

even for a haiku this was so good! LOVE the sensory detail~ even with this simple poem you convey thoughts and images brilliantly. and the next time you say you're a bad writer i'm going to come over your house with my flute! XD

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on November 17, 2009

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darkroseX3

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I'm a naive soul wandering the Earth, in search for something worth while. So, sorry if things get a little emo. But I'm also an otaku, so that makes up for it, I hope. I can't promise you much if you.. more..