Rose Petals

A rose on a window sill. A girl in the corner. Both crying, inside and out.

It sits on her windowsill

And stares.

No eyes to see tears

No ears to hear cries.

Yet it feels her pain.

It feels her sorrow.

And it wilts.

 

A pile of now hopeless rose petals.

Reviews

[Susan14]

oh this poem is amazing, i loved it! this poem made me almost cry, that's how good it is. your really good at conveying emotions through your wrting. i loved the idea of the poem "Rose Petal" amazing title, how'd you come up with it, you should help me write great poems like you. the poem is very creative with the rose petals and it has such nice detail to it, not to mention the emotions conveyed in it and your words flow together seamlessly, this is truely a great write! Keep up the great work! :D

[Momo the Elf]

oh.. this poem made me sad... but i guess that means your just good at conveying emotion through your writing. i like the idea of the poem, very creative with the rose petals and such. nice detail, and your words flow together seamlessly. great write!