endless fight?

Death

       a hole we all enter

Life

       a never ending cycle

 

we are stuck

 

         no way out

 

yet we fight and we fight

 

         we cant get enough

Reviews

[Archia]

I can't help but think though that life isn't so much a cycle; it ends in death, it doesn't return to the beginning- I guess though, it could depend on what you believe. Anyway, this was another simple poem, but it held its point strongly and that was nice.

[RachelReaper]

hmm... yes it does seem to be endless, doesn't it? But we make an effort anyway because that's all we can do. The words cascade down like a waterfall, wonderful.

[Sid]

Truth and interestingly put forward. You have dealt with an important truth in a really short poem but you have expressed it really well...well done!!

[Derek Cummings]

Short and to the point...and so true. I like surfing upon poems that aren't the traditional ones I read often. Thanks for sharing.