Taken

I cant breath

His hands are on my throat

 

I cant see

He has blindfolded me

 

I cant speak

He has gagged me

 

I cant move

He has bound me

 

I smell dirt

He is burying me

 

My heart stops

He has killed me

Reviews

[Archia]

It's quite gripping, and the last line comes with a bit of impact to it. I think the simplicity of it, gives it its strength.

[SlimBizkit]

This is quite scary. :O Good writing, very gothic and dark. You can talk to me if you ever need to.