With Me

You did this to me

Turned me into a monster

Made me into me

The Pain you caused

Changed my personality

Threw me through the fires of hell

I'm burning inside 

I think I might die

I won't go alone

I'll take you with me

Reviews

[Archia]

I really liked the shortness of this, I thought it made it more effective and had more impact. I thought the last line was great, pulling them down with them, really nice.

[Rogue]

And this we call a perfect example of "Hell hath no fury..." (You know the rest). Both literally and figuratively.

A lot of pain comes through the words in this one. Along with furious anger. So you got the feelings across loud and clear.

On a personal note, I hope this is just a write and not something you yourself are going through. If it is, I am sorry. Grieving a lost relationship (even if they're an a*****e) has a whole cycle of emotions that are truly hell.