Dreams

A poem about dream and death and how they connect...

Dreams

carrying you away

to another world

another life

letting you explore the outskirts of life

Death

the world turns

as you fall into darkness 

freeing you from your prison of life

let go

Ripple

a small disturbed reflection

could change you

your dreams, your life, and 

you

Reviews

[Paul]

Very well written. In the rough draft period of writing, fragmented sentences are key. "letting you explore the outskirts of life" gave me undeniable chills. That kind of writing is why I'm here. To learn from others. Thank you for that. Very inspiring