What is Deep Down

A boy sits on the stones of hopes and dreams

He is accompanied by many beautiful people.

Finding they are really ugly deep down.

However one seems different.

For she has no face at all.

She speaks in a voice.

So sweet and soft.

He finds that deep down.

She is very lovly.

And as a smiling face.

Appers on the emptiness.

He finds how truly devine she is.

Reviews

[Midnight]

A person's surface only gives you a picture, but a person's personality can give you a vision. I believe you capture the important things in life in your writing.