darkened rain

darkened rain

A Poem by the darkest shadow
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very first thing i wrote

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The darkness is closing in
I feel that I can’t breathe
Of all the people that I’ve been
I hate the ones they see
 
The stories I tell
The secrets I keep
But must shut them all in
And not let go a peep
 
The scars will grow darker
The cuts will come newer
And yet no one has to see
That I have no answer
 
No shield from the Hell
No killers for the pain
The clouds will grow darker
So let come down the rain
 
The skies shall bring in death
As water rushes from the sky
I take my last breath
And hope no one hears my cry

© 2009 the darkest shadow


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Haunting but very good. I especially like the last two stanzas. great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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the darkest shadow
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to explain it best, i write when im upset. im struggling with bipolar disorder and other problems relating to that.. my writings portray the dark and twisted thoughts i have every day. writing is just.. more..

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