Gone

This is for Christian Matthew Steele. For a boy I will never stop loving even though I know he is gone Because it was he who taught me how to see the sunlight instead of the darkness.

Sometimes I wonder if the pain will stop 

If my heart will stop breaking

I know he's gone now 

But He never really left me at all

He tortures my heart and hurts my mind

The longing for the person you love

Now he is gone

And I cannot help but remember 

there were so many things we did 

all the times we just smiled at each other 

I can't keep waking up alone 

My dreams are haunted by a person who never died

But a person can vanish without saying goodbye

He was so kind and warm 

Now I'm cold and alone 

I wonder if it'll stop hurting

Wondering if I'll stop dreaming of him

He was the best of them all

I still hear his voice

still see his smile 

I wonder if I'll ever forget

Cause He was my everything 

Cause he was the one who knew me

Now he's gone 

My heart stands alone it still beats 

but it is a heartless drum 

Beating listlessly 

if only to go on

He was the sun in my darkness 

The gold of my mine

He was the spirit of the wind

And he was all mine 

But now he is gone 

to my desolation 

I can only see him in my dreams 

for he was the man of my dreams 

I shall miss him forever more

For he had a heart of gold 

and a smile like a rainbow

And I will dream of the times that 

we stood together in a time that 

was not a dream 

But in flesh and bone 

He made me a promise on the last day 

He said that he would see me again someday.

Author's Note

I am not good at my grammar but I would like to know what people like about my poetry. what is the story, what theme can be taken from this, what do you like about it, what do you not like?

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