Come On Home

Just a silly bit of nonsense!

Baby, how I needed you

When I needed you.

Your crooked smile

Your heavy heart

The way you sing when you're happy

And sad

You pulled on my heartstrings

Had me from the very start without seduction

And I gave you oh, so much power

I can't  regret a thing

Don't forget I'm a romantic

With silly connotations

No one can heal this state of cancer

The way you scolded me

Almost killed me

As you said your last goodbyes oh.

Don't forget we are so strong, so bloody strong.

So come on home?

Reviews

[Ayvid N]

No elaborate imagery is required to express what the heart feels. And when it's love, we can feel it in the air!

You wrote simply & beautifully!

[Sami Khalil]

Don't forget I'm a romantic

With silly connotations

No one can heal this state of cancer.
A nice write...:)

[Ethale Captor]

It sounds like she/he is picking his/her self up with a hope barely existing, which makes it an extremely emotional write. Excellent job, it captures all of the intended emotion, I believe.

[Elena Covaci]

You definitely understand the underlying emotion in this, thank you!

[Ethale Captor]

Not a problem, it was a magnificent write.

[marie]

the way this piece seems to hold a hopeless hope(i know that sounds strange, but it makes sense once you think about it) seems to keep that general, i can't believe you left me throughout the whole thing, great job:) i loved it:)