Severence.

Severence.

A Poem by Elena Covaci
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A man betwixt with a succubus of sorts

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To appreciate
The lustful gleam
in such innocent eyes
She lead me on
For a lair of deceit
I was simply,
simply what, I cannot be certain,
But I was hers.
She never spoke, never questioned
The validity of my love.
And when all was over,
she left me alone.
The silence was smothering,
The window as dull as my pain,
It hazed over.
With such a deafening silence.
I could never possibly imagine.
The severence
Of those pretty blue eyes

© 2012 Elena Covaci


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Elena Covaci
Made in a blur, even I questioned it

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If this be the vision and words of "a man betwixt with a succubus of sorts" then he has truly been beguiled for, in truth, t'was no succubus but perhaps one of na daoine cnoc. We cannot know this for certain but watch carefully, in the eve of the next new moon, if he has na cluasa dearga then bind him tight lest he disappear forever from sight. An excellent poem, Elena! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Perfect, possitively perfect! I applaud you :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If this be the vision and words of "a man betwixt with a succubus of sorts" then he has truly been beguiled for, in truth, t'was no succubus but perhaps one of na daoine cnoc. We cannot know this for certain but watch carefully, in the eve of the next new moon, if he has na cluasa dearga then bind him tight lest he disappear forever from sight. An excellent poem, Elena! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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The silence was smothering,
The window as dull as my pain.
A nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think you got the message across wit some skill..the uncertainty..the longing the innocence and the experienced...very well written

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Elena Covaci

12 Years Ago

Thank you so very much, muchly appreciated :)

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Elena Covaci
Elena Covaci

Athlone, Ireland



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SimplyStrange! I'm just a darkly eccentric, humorous and dramatic girl, putting her feelings into words at the risk of being laughed at! I write about darkness, loss and despair. I am such a cliche!.. more..

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A Poem by Elena Covaci