I'm Alive

pain is there as a reminder to tell you, you are still alive.

Still awake,
running on the fumes
from yesterday
the skin is bruised
bleeding from the inside
The hair is grayed
and badly burned
all a memory
of yesterday.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. Description described pain and hard times. You said a lot using short sentences. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[chandlerl]

Thanks for your kind review. =) For what is poetry about if not to share your feeling, good and bad with the world. =)