dreamer to the world

this was actually something I wrote in English last year my friend wrote the twin to the the World to the Dreamer

I catch my breathe and take the chance
I’ll be right here to take my stance, 
no way of shaking of this smile,
stay here for a little while, 

So don’t forget me as I was,
distance will support my cause,
so don’t try to bring me down,
or try to take away my crown,

In the city that needs no sleep,
I promise you i will not weep,
nevermore will i be alone,
as I journey to my throne

Reviews

[Emosawa]

The entire poem was well structured. I liked the lines "In the city that needs no sleep, I promise you I will not weep." It shows that in an uncaring town you will stand strong (sorry to translate it). Also I liked the near rhyme "was" and "cause." Great poem!

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

Thanks so much, and it's fine you translated it. I'm glad you like it.