dead

my heart won't beat anymore

my soul won't shine

my smile won't appear

the scars keep spreading

the darkness eats me away piece by piece 

nothing left to do

no way to fight

please save your goodbyes

for even though I'm gone 

we shall meet again

for in this life I am dead

but in another I live

Reviews

[Johnny]

In mine you live.... 100%

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

awwwe thank you

[I Am Svetlana]

I enjoyed the darkness you expressed in this piece & ive written so many dark poems, it's hard to keep track sometimes. Not all days will feel like this, mainly it turns out to be all in your head...your thoughts trying you against yourself, but that's just my opinion. I'm no person to analyze anyone when I'm just beginning to figure myself out for a change & in a stable spot in my life. I understand how awful the dark moods can often get you, but just put pen to paper and get out everything your feeling. Thoughts, emotions, etc. That's normally what I do & I don't stop until I can't think of anything to write anymore, until I feel that everything is out. Writing is such a wonderful & powerful release and a positive way to relax your mind when everything seems to be 'too much'.

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

thank you, so much I appreciate this

[David the writer]

Awe, this was really sad. Cheer up, mate! But hey, the poem was interesting, it kept my attention.

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

thanks, and I'm glad. :)