lied

you tell me you love me.....lie

you told me you would always be there......lie

you told me you would never want anyone else....lie

you told me you wanted nothing but the best for me.....lie

you told me I was beautiful.....lie

see all you can do is lie to me

and cut my heart deeper

I might as well put a bullet in my brain

not like you'ld notice if I was gone or not 

Reviews

[matrixmark]

A tough subject for many of us which you have written about. The last 3 lines were very hard hitting I have to say. Nobody but nobdy is worth the time given to pull a trigger.

Your writing is strong, a lot of anger Is going on here - dont let anybody get the better you, ust move on.

Strong, striking and I feel the piece is written from the heart.

Mark.

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

thank you so much and I'll try too.

[mattavelli]

Hello, Shae! :)
Bullets are bad for you. I've heard Match.com is pretty good.

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

lol thanks