empty inbox

I expect to see your name
but yet again I am fore shamed
I see nothing but anther empty inbox 

Reviews

[matrixmark]

Good little piece. I read it as a person who has met someone and desires for the new person in their life to appear in the form of an email on their screen. Probably pressing the F5 key over and over again. But ends up having a heavy heart as the inbox is empty.


Nice little piece.
Mark.

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

that's how I feel thanks

[matrixmark]

Welcome.

Mark.

[samparks,sam]

I expect to see your name
but yet again I am fore shamed
I see nothing but anther empty inbox
Faith in god you see every thing in your inbox

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

awwe thanks

[Inject Positivity]

Yes, the view of empty inbox, I can remember the hurt it carried when I was waiting for someone to remember my name and drop a message... 3 lines carrying deep meaning... Did you mean 'another' in the last line?

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

yeah I did

[ReedWrite]

Nice.
One spelling correction...last line...(another).
I like short poems that pack an punch in terms of relaying the emotion, and yours did that Good job.

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

thank you and I'm glad you liekd it