Not Okay

Is it ok to feel like this? 

For my depression and anxiety to prevent me,

From moving on in life. 

I'm so scared of everything not working out. 

That I don't even want to try. 

And my eyes see no point to a future,

When they want to burn out. 

I'm not sure if this is ok. 

I know I need to get a job. 

And my license

And move out. 

But I'm just so scared of everything... 

And all I think about half the time is dying. 

So is it even worth it..?  

Reviews

[Antoinette]

I can relate to this SO bad! The bad thing is that when you die, life doesn't magically get easier, it's just that we lose hundreds of opportunities of seeing life get better..

[Kitten]

Very true.

[Heartstrings]

I think its worth it baby...I get the crippling fear. But its worth the risk. I promise it is...

[Kitten]

If you say so...

[Heartstrings]

We gotta try something. We can't get anywhere by living in fear of what may or may not happen.

[Kitten]

I know....

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such sadness is being betrayed in this piece, and so many can relate with the depression. However it is important to never give up when life throws curve balls at you. There's this saying God gives his strongest soldiers the harder battles. Don't let this battle define you, keep your chin up. I like this write, nicely penned. :-)

[Kitten]

Thank you.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Briana O'Connor]

There is such sadness in your words, desperation leaps from the page. However, this piece lacks poetic rhythm and consistency. Try focusing on one point and letting in flow from your mind to the page. Then adjust as needed to make it flow into poetic bliss. This piece could be turned into multiple ideas, as there is so much being discussed in this writing. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work. Please return the favor by reviewing one of my pieces.